Fabiana, I thought that the information you brought up in your elevator pitch was useful and I liked how you used a story to relate to the consumer and give them a chance to see in what situation they can use the product. However, the structure of the elevator pitch can use improvement. The volume can be raised a little higher and I think that standing up while giving the pitch would also make it more effective. Finally, I think that speaking in a more passionate tone will make investors and consumers more inclined to listen and try out your product. Keep up the good work!
I think you did a great job with the pitch! I was very engaged from the beginning with the visualization and how much you related to the audience. That is a major factor, along usefulness, that will encourage a consumer to purchase a product/service. I agree with Adrian about the volume of your voice and considering standing, and I believe these are doable changes that can improve the pitch! But, overall I liked the pitch and think you did a great job.
Fabiana, I thought that the information you brought up in your elevator pitch was useful and I liked how you used a story to relate to the consumer and give them a chance to see in what situation they can use the product. However, the structure of the elevator pitch can use improvement. The volume can be raised a little higher and I think that standing up while giving the pitch would also make it more effective. Finally, I think that speaking in a more passionate tone will make investors and consumers more inclined to listen and try out your product. Keep up the good work!
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ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job with the pitch! I was very engaged from the beginning with the visualization and how much you related to the audience. That is a major factor, along usefulness, that will encourage a consumer to purchase a product/service. I agree with Adrian about the volume of your voice and considering standing, and I believe these are doable changes that can improve the pitch! But, overall I liked the pitch and think you did a great job.