The feedback from my last elevator post was mainly to show more confidence. People had great tips such as raising my tone and adding a more passionate element. Also standing and using hand gestures shows more confidence and can add persuading elements.
In this pitch I stood up, used hand gestures, and spoke with more enthusiasm.
Fabiana, I thought you did a better job with your elevator pitch this time. I liked the story you used to relate the situation to many people and grab the attention of the investors. I also liked the way you described your product and addressed some of the concerns you have heard and explained how they can be mitigated. Also, I liked the way that you described the benefits. One thing that can improve your next pitch is volume. There was background noise in your video, and I think your tone can also be louder and more vibrant to show excitement for the product. Overall, great job!
Hey Fabiana, I believe that you delivered your pitch better than last time. I thought you did very well in presenting your idea and creating a situation that I believe a lot of people can relate to. You described the benefits of the product very good as well. The only thing I can say that I think your pitch can improve on is the noise background. Although I was able to hear your pitch the noise from the background didn't make it to easy to hear. Overall, I thought you did great!
Hey Fabiana, I think you did an amazing job on your pitch and did improve from the last time. It was engaging, professional, and overall really well at displaying your product. It was very detailed and described very well as well as your diction I felt was very good but the noise in the background was a distractor. I think you had a good amount of information that provided your pitch to be clear.
Fabiana, I thought you did a better job with your elevator pitch this time. I liked the story you used to relate the situation to many people and grab the attention of the investors. I also liked the way you described your product and addressed some of the concerns you have heard and explained how they can be mitigated. Also, I liked the way that you described the benefits. One thing that can improve your next pitch is volume. There was background noise in your video, and I think your tone can also be louder and more vibrant to show excitement for the product. Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteHey Fabiana,
ReplyDeleteI believe that you delivered your pitch better than last time. I thought you did very well in presenting your idea and creating a situation that I believe a lot of people can relate to. You described the benefits of the product very good as well. The only thing I can say that I think your pitch can improve on is the noise background. Although I was able to hear your pitch the noise from the background didn't make it to easy to hear. Overall, I thought you did great!
Hey Fabiana,
ReplyDeleteI think you did an amazing job on your pitch and did improve from the last time. It was engaging, professional, and overall really well at displaying your product. It was very detailed and described very well as well as your diction I felt was very good but the noise in the background was a distractor. I think you had a good amount of information that provided your pitch to be clear.