I had improved on my first video through the second elevator pitch I posted. I noticed that some of the feedback I was getting was to have a better tone and remove and background noise that can distract listeners.
Fabiana, I really enjoyed your elevator pitch. You did a really good job with this one. I really liked the gestures you used and how your tone was more engaging in the pitch. I really liked how you connected the product to not just any game, but one they have been desperately waiting for. I also liked how you described what the product looks like and how they will carry it around. Also, I like how you stirred up enjoyment by explain that they would get a new experience they have never had before at a game with your product. I also liked how you addressed the product to people who attend games regularly as they will be a major market. Keep up the good work!
Hey, Fabiana, I enjoyed your elevator pitch a lot and think you did a great job. Over the course of your three elevator pitches you have really improved. This one was more engaging and provided hooks throughout that the made the person receiving it actually want it and want it now. Your passion for your product came through and that is what made this elevator pitch a great one.
Hey Fabiana, I really enjoyed hearing your pitch but mostly appreciate how much you have improved since your first pitch. Your final pitch gave an overall more engaging tone. You were also able to give an explanation of why your product would give your targeted customers a new and great experience. Overall, I really enjoyed your pitch and was able to see your passion for your product through your pitch.
Fabiana, I really enjoyed your elevator pitch. You did a really good job with this one. I really liked the gestures you used and how your tone was more engaging in the pitch. I really liked how you connected the product to not just any game, but one they have been desperately waiting for. I also liked how you described what the product looks like and how they will carry it around. Also, I like how you stirred up enjoyment by explain that they would get a new experience they have never had before at a game with your product. I also liked how you addressed the product to people who attend games regularly as they will be a major market. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHey, Fabiana,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your elevator pitch a lot and think you did a great job. Over the course of your three elevator pitches you have really improved. This one was more engaging and provided hooks throughout that the made the person receiving it actually want it and want it now. Your passion for your product came through and that is what made this elevator pitch a great one.
Hey Fabiana,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed hearing your pitch but mostly appreciate how much you have improved since your first pitch. Your final pitch gave an overall more engaging tone. You were also able to give an explanation of why your product would give your targeted customers a new and great experience. Overall, I really enjoyed your pitch and was able to see your passion for your product through your pitch.